The short story The Unfinished by Patrice Williams really is worth checking out. While reading the story I could feel the dark wit that consumed Donny York. Also his concept of the Unfinished, and how the government could bring back the dead for 72 hours for murder case trials was a very cool concept! I am a total fan of dark humor, twists, and the sci-fi nature of things. It would be unreal to have some one come back to point their decomposing finger at their killer, but in this short story they can. The visuals from the deaths some of these Unfinishers experienced were just gross (and, I like gross.) I'd love to see something like this turned into a full novel, and then a SERIES, or even a movie. But, I'd rather it be a series! I don't want to give too much away.. tho maybe Melanies licorice perfume, and her not remembering Donny drove him to do something drastic in his mundane life.. I thought the story was well written, and it kept my attention.You can check the UnFinished out on Amazon, & read my review there too.
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